My persuasive writing

Dear mum

I want a baby puppy because I am lonely.

I would like to have a baby puppy because I am very lonely and I well take care of it.I will take the puppy for a walk every day.I well feed it water and dog biscuits.Puppy's gives me company.

I want a puppy for when he or she grows bigger and bigger to guard me or my family.

I hope you understand what I am wanting mum.

From Khloe

My Cross country experience .

On Thursday it was cross country.In the morning I was so happy so I got up and got redy in my PE gear then ate  Weet-bix. After that my dad took me and my brothers Arli and Koby to the farm.

The first race was the Year 8's then the year 7's then 6's 5's and 4's 0's 2's and year 3's. Year 3 is my year so before my race I was so hungry that I ate a american hot dog before my race then it was time to race.The first race was the year 3 boys the winner in the year 3 boy was Brody. After that it was the year 3 girls race it was boilling hot at the end of my race I came 4th and the winner was Keita. At the end of all of the races that I could eat what I like.

In the end I got to bring a friend and I picked Casanita.

My Holiday

On the holiday Zariah come to my house. We played last to leave the Box.Me and Zariah brag food water and blank it pilo.The time when it got Very hard because I nelly lost.The winner was Zariah.

The next day Zariah was still there. We slept in my brother's bed. We made ice chocolate.Zariah stayed for 3 nights

The next 3 days Me and my family went to the farm.We went on the motorbike with my cousins to it was so AWESOME I loved it.at night time Me and my brothers and cousins went hunting we got 4 possums also at drak,drak time i got so tired my brothers and cousins come to take me to my Nana's house. The next day we went back home for school.       

All About Me

Hi my name is Khloe I am 7 years old  and I go to pompallier catholic school. My favorite frout is whetermail and strawberries because there NICA and josy. My favorite colors is purpul and pink blue. I have bruwn eyes and brown hair.